Quite good
I saw all the chapters. It's quite a good work you and your friends are doing. Keep up the good work. One thing you should do is to make a pause button or something for the text (like in chapter 1 and 2) or slow down the text, as sometimes it's a bit too fast (specially for people who barely understand english). The LF2 game is great, and it's cool someone does a movie about it. Btw do you intend to put Julian (or justin don't remember the name of the big guy) in the series? :P